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Friday 12 June 2009 Despite all the planning I do for my books, I don't tend to do much worldbuilding up front. This is one aspect of planning that I leave for the writing process. I'm not sure why I take this approach; I know of some writers who do extensive worldbuilding before even beginning any planning, and even some who enjoy worldbuilding but don't plan their plot at all. A lot of my worldbuilding takes place in my head as a way of absorbing the atmosphere of the world of my story. I get an essence of the place; a scent of it, rather than an absolute definition of its boundaries and content. Perhaps this is why I am so vague at writing descriptively. I forget details but remember impressions; how a place (real or imagined) makes me feel, what it reminds me of. These daydreams that I have of my characters simply being in a place may or may not make it into the final story, and I won't know until I write the scene whether I need to include details that may first require a detour into worldbuilding. More about the writing career development course I'm taking Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 13 June 2009 Elle
- Posted 13 June 2009 Tuesday 9 June 2009 It's amazing how a little dose of reality can put a fictional life on hold. At the start of the year we had the pleasure of house guests (my in-laws, with whom I get on very well) staying with us for two months. In February we haunted the various rooms of our house trying to stay calm while we made the aching decisions of which of our items were important enough to shove in a suitcase in case we had to make a run for it; bush fire threatened just a few kilometres away. I was 36 weeks pregnant at the time - another consideration for giving myself enough time to get out early. Our family left with more insight into what we deal with most summers than I think they wanted to have. But luckily our area was never under real threat and we were left very grateful after seeing the devastation that hit some other really stunning parts of our state. And then a week later our beautiful son decided it was time to find out what all the excitement was about. He was 3 weeks earlier than anticipated, but, in hindsight, he and I were perfectly ready for his birth. Just as I'd planned, I gave birth to him in the comfort and serenity of our lovely home, with no drugs or interventions. It was such a perfect experience that I have spent many hours since day-dreaming the labour and birth over again so that I can keep it as fresh in my memory as possible. But then came colic. And silent reflux. And intestinal wind pain. And hours and hours of soothing a crying baby. It's been a tough few months. Fiction will resume it's place soon, I'm sure, but in the meantime it's too subtle to push aside the impact of reality. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 11 June 2009 Elle
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January 2009 It's been a busy couple of months. I put my fiction on hold in order to work on a project for my father-in-law, who turned 70 this month. I'm still not sure how I managed to keep it a semi-surprise, or how I managed to get it done in time, but somehow I converted several dinner time conversations, some sneaky questions, an incomplete six-page memoir, and dozens of photographs into a printed book. It is a continuing biography that our whole family can enjoy as a reference and celebration. So I'm getting back into my novel now and really looking forward to spending some time with my characters. They've been neglected for too long. An interesting exercise I'm working on at the moment is to come up with a couple of story ideas "on demand". This may seem contrary to what I need (ie, I have far too many ideas noted down and not enough time and energy to get to work on them. But it is not about how many ideas you do or don't have, but rather a case of developing the ability to grab any opportunity that might arise (a great contest, a sudden request from a publisher, an offer of a lifetime - that sort of thing). Keeping the brain sharp and the feet thinking. Too many years of curbing my inspiration while I first finish the ideas I have committed to has left my muse tapping her fingers on the desk in a state of stupor. Inspiration does still arrive, but inspiration on demand?... not as simple as it used to be. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 2 February 2009 Elle
- Posted 2 February 2009 Tuesday
23 December 2008 I finally watched The Dark Knight on DVD over the weekend, and it was actually not as bad as I expected. In fact, once the movie switched from the Joker as the villain to the far more interesting Two-Face, it became thoroughly enjoyable. But then Two-Face has always been a more rounded villain, even in the comics and animations. And, of course, the chameleonic Gary Oldman is always worth savouring. I'll bet most people didn't even notice that "Sirius Black" was in The Dark Knight. Or "Dracula". Or the blood-chilling "Stansfield" - after years of watching Oldman as the villain it is a real pleasure to see him in a run of sympathetic roles. So, on to the verdict of Heath Ledger's performance. The Joker is a very flat, one-dimensional character at the best of times. Jack Nicholson played him with tongue-in-cheek relish, which made for an enjoyable piece of theatre. The writers of The Dark Knight didn't give Heath Ledger much to work with when they stripped this character down to nothing more than an ordinary psychopath with lousy make-up. Such a character serves entirely as a foil for the hero's skills and abilities. And unfortunately Ledger didn't have the skills to imbue such a flat character with any further depth. I didn't find this incarnation of the Joker a particularly dark version, either (contrary to what has been ceaselessly touted in the media since Heath Ledger's death). But, as the facilitator of the emergence of Two-Face, the Joker is fine, and depth of character is not required for such a role. But there are some really good examples of the techniques of showing and telling in this movie. First the Joker tells the story of why he has scars on his face (no, I hadn't noticed the scars either), then later he gives a completely different explanation to someone else. This is an example of telling used as showing. The actual backstory is irrelevant; the point of the story is to reveal the Joker's insincerity and unreliability as a narrator, and this is a technique that can be used to good effect in a story if used with care. In comparison to the exposition of the Joker, the audience is shown the transition of the character of Harvey Dent to the villain Two-Face. This is a very clear example of how the technique of showing creates empathy, whereas telling simply provides information without emotion. If you need empathy from your readers, showing the character or particular plot thread is your best option. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 27 December 2008 Elle
- Posted 28 December 2008 Saturday 6 December 2008 So, after about a week's work and 6000 words, I've completed the synopsis (4000 words) and character notes (2000) for this new story. Now I'm satisfied that I can leave it to mature and allow other stories to fill my mind and be written, and when I come back to this story I will have all the important details noted down and ready to work for me. I can also, now, get back to working on my writing career course, which I put on hold because I didn't want to distract my muse while it was playing with this new idea. What fun that was though! Every now and then I believe everyone needs a new idea to inject some fresh energy into their thinking. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 20 December 2008 Elle
- Posted 21 December 2008 Monday 24 November 2008 What do news stories of horrific instances of child abuse in Austria and other European countries have in common with the birth in captivity of a pygmy hippo? Somehow the combination has sparked the idea for a new teen novel that my muse has kept me awake over for the past two nights. I spent today on the planning and fleshing out the main characters, and tomorrow I'll knuckle down and write the synopsis. It's a lot darker than what I've been writing for the past few years, but at least it has an uplifting ending. I always feel wired when I'm unravelling a new story for the first time. Hyper - like I've had too much caffeine and sugar, which is a strange feeling on top of the ultra-relaxed state caused by all the pregnancy hormones floating around in my system. I haven't had coffee since June, either, so this is an interesting substitute. I don't know how freewriters can sit down and just start writing. For me the thrill comes with watching and listening to the story play out in my head over an intense period of a day or two. It's like I'm seeing double for a while - a movie being played on top of my real life; my attention split between the two. By the end of it, the whole thing is in there in its entirety, in my brain, except for a few transition details and the nuts and bolts of the dialogue. And then the subplots arrive, and wind their way into the story, altering slight details and improving motives and adding twists to the ending. I get to make notes at this point, getting the details down while my brain studies the whole. And then I can leave the story for months or years at a time, knowing that I can pick it up whenever the time is right and it will be waiting. As I read over the notes I've made I'll feel like I'm experiencing a story that is both fresh and new and an old friend at the same time. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 27 November 2008 Elle
- Posted 27 November 2008 Thursday 13
November 2008 I've been stuck on editing an important scene on the first page of my completed children's book, and eventually I decided to get some opinions from other writers (thanks Wendy, Lauri, and Sher). More on "Showing versus Telling" Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 20 November 2008 Elle
- Posted 21 November 2008 Tuesday 4 November 2008 As mentioned previously, I've been deliberating my genre choices and doing some research. It seems I can rest easily for the moment, and that my decision to put Breaking Point aside for a while is quite a good one. I should be able to use it to re-enter the market if and when my books start to suffer from the "ordering to the net" policies of the bookstores. (I'll have to write about this issue at some stage, too.) I have two further ideas for thrillers up my sleeve - one is depressingly dark, though, but the other could be an intriguing conspiracy theory romp that I could put a futuristic spin on and thus segue into science fiction from there. I'm still a little concerned about the leap from writing for children to writing for adults, although I don't consider myself a "children's author" at all. It just so happens that the books I'm currently writing are suitable for children; Breaking Point, however, most definitely is not. I can see that a pseudonym may be required (another one), but there doesn't seem to be an issue with working in this manner on the agent/publisher side (ie, having a plan to pick up and start again versus sitting and watching your career die). The issue arises with establishing a (new?) readership for a new line of books. This is where I've begun to cause myself a slight problem. A clever writer would work this all out in advance and try to link the genres in some way, even under different names, so that loyal readers can follow that writer from one line of books to the other. This, in turn, means that instead of starting again from scratch, you start a new line with a ready-made readership. But it doesn't work like that when moving from children's books to adults'. (Unless I can stretch it out long enough for any fans to have grown up by the time of publication...) But despite that, I'm in the right place. Now I need to finish Lesson Two so that I can figure out how I'm going to link my books together - produce a "brand", I suppose, although it's a lot more creative and fun than the marketing people make it sound (and far more subtle). I'm really glad, now, that I've signed up for the lessons every fortnight instead of weekly. I'm already lagging behind (thanks to a schedule that has gone nuts) and according to the Sideways student forum it gets even more intense in upcoming lessons. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 7 November 2008 Elle
- Posted 7 November 2008 Friday 17 October 2008 One of the major issues affecting my writing progress is the "stab in the dark" approach I've been taking over the past 13 years. I started off with
two drafts of a silly mystery novel that I made a lot of mistakes on and eventually filed in my round file as my "training novel". I took the one element I still liked from that manuscript and developed my second novel as an adult crime thriller that needed several drafts before I was happy with my plot and my writing, although not both together. It still needs one more major rewrite to correct the sequencing of the plot. Comments (4) Edie Dykeman - Posted 18 October 2008 Elle
- Posted 18 October 2008 Selma
- Posted 20 October 2008 Elle
- Posted 21 October 2008 Friday 3 October 2008 It's no secret that I keep stalling on my fiction every time I have a major non-fiction project in the works. I can't seem to concentrate on reality and unreality, and put in the work on both, at the same time. The first quarter of this year I was commissioned to create 40 brain teaser puzzles. The middle of the year saw a challenge to produce 100 Squidoo lenses. Writing about writing also has its downside, and I finally decided to call it a day at BellaOnline where I have been the Fiction Writing Editor for two years, overlapping with a two-year stint as the Creativity Editor. And there's a baby on the way, which gives me something else I want to spend part of my limited time writing about. I decided I needed something to help me focus on my fiction career - not just the writing part of it, but the development and publication side of it too. I've started a year-long course which I think will help me do exactly this, and also keep me on track and writing at least something during those messy and exciting months when we have a newborn on our hands. I'm going to occasionally write about how I'm going with this course and whether it's working for me, not just because it's relevant to my blog, but also because I'm promoting it as a course for other writers who need mentorship in building a writing career. This course is not for everyone, so this is a good way for others to find out if it is right for them. Further details are here. Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 20 October 2008 Elle
- Posted 21 October 2008 Monday 24 September 2008 A friend or relative of an author, entrusted with a draft copy of her manuscript, somehow released said manuscript onto the Internet - whether intentionally or unintentionally, is unclear. Now, while having an unedited draft distributed publicly without your knowledge and permission is devastating, The author's reaction to this situation is downright childish. Instead of taking the issue up with the person who violated her copyright, the author took her fit of pique out on her fans, declaring that she will no longer finish the book in question. She puts it this way on her blog: "...I believe that there was no malicious intent with the initial distribution. [But] it is easy for people to obtain and share items that do not legally belong to them. No matter how this is done, it is still dishonest. This has been a very upsetting experience for me, but I hope it will at least leave my fans with a better understanding of copyright and the importance of artistic control." Seriously. Earth to Author! It is the "trusted individual" to whom you gave a draft copy of your manuscript who is initially at fault here, not your fans. It is not illegal to read something that violates someone's copyright. It is not illegal to link to something that violates copyright. It is illegal to copy it and distribute it to others, but consider what your fans may have been thinking: it happens, sometimes, that authors die before completing an important book in a series. It happened to Douglas Adams and it nearly happened to Stephen King. A favourite author's latest book in a series is available, early and free, on the Internet and you expect die-hard fans NOT to read it? Let me repeat that point: You're punishing your fans for reading your books - for loving your books. And you've justified their rationale by pulling the plug on the book after all. In a final little twist to this sordid tale, the author, herself, has posted a pdf file of the violated book on her blog. Again, she says: "I'd rather my fans not read this version of [the book]." What a challenge! She concludes by saying: "I cannot begin to tell [my wonderful fans] how much each of you means to me." Really? It doesn't show. Does anyone else think this smells awfully like a very tacky, manipulative, and badly handled publicity stunt? Comments (2) Selma
- Posted 20 October 2008 Elle
- Posted 21 October 2008 Monday 11 August
2008 I'm not certain I want to watch the movie The Dark Knight, so I've decided to write this post, and make the points I want to make, before I get roped into seeing it. I've heard the rave reviews, so I'm wondering if I'll be retracting my words. I guess we'll see. On with my rant. I can't understand why the Nolan brothers decided to start remaking Batman movies that have already been done, and done well (with the exception of the glitch that saw the seriously misguided casting of Val Kilmer in one of them). Batman Begins was such a good attempt by the Nolan brothers to put their stamp on this franchise, and it was a really original take on the Batman story. Why would they spoil what they've begun by settling for a remake when they could make a second movie just as original. There are plenty of villains in the Batman comic books, and I'm sure the writers could come up with others. Much as I enjoyed Christian Bale in Batman Begins, he will never replace Michael Keaton as the best of the Batmen. And I cannot even imagine how Heath Ledger will attempt to take over from Jack Nicholson as the iconic Joker. And therein the main issue. So much hype has gone into this movie due to the death of Heath Ledger, that I am worried it has swayed viewers' opinions. They're talking about a possible Oscar-winning performance... for a comic-book movie! That's just as insane as the hopelessly bad make-up job. Having said that, I must admit that a recent couple of rumours have me slightly excited about upcoming Batman remakes: that Johnny Depp may be cast as The Riddler, and Angelina Jolie as Catwoman. Wow. Now that I can actually imagine working. Michelle Pfeiffer was awesome, but I have to admit that Angelina was born for that role. But what's wrong with developing an entirely new storyline involving Catwoman? The most worrying development, however, is the deviance of this latest Batman movie from the essence of the genre. Like everything else we're being spoon-fed these days, it looks like The Dark Knight is jumping onto the reality- based story-telling bandwagon, and straying too far from the comic-book-style urban fantasy genre. From what I've heard - and the words "terrorism" and "torture" were in there somewhere - it reminds me too much of the massive disappointment that was the Daniel Craig Bond movie Casino Royale. As far as I'm concerned, Casino Royale was not a Bond movie, no matter what the main character was called. Bond has always before been the invincible spy - he hardly ever gets caught, and, if he does, he escapes without sustaining much more than a few body punches and dishing out far more than he gets. Casino Royale was too close to the bone, and I hated it. I fear the same for The Dark Knight. Comments (5) David Mascellani - Posted 19 August 2008 Selma
- Posted 24 August 2008 Elle
- Posted 25 August 2008 SusanVillasLewis
- Posted 21 October 2008 Elle
- I'd forgotten about the books' version of Bond, though, now that you mention it. I only read a few Bond books as a teenager, and I couldn't get hold of Casino Royale. I was referring more to the branding of the Bond (movie) franchise as an easy-to-watch adventure. They broke their brand in the latest movie because they're trying to attach themselves to the latest proverbial musical go-kart instead. Bad move. Posted 22 October 2008 Tuesday 15 July
2008 I did a jump for joy when I read that the reality TV show Big Brother is finally being cancelled due to lack of interest. Thank every fictional god there is for that small miracle. Channel Ten apparently now has 120 hours of their 2009 schedule to refill. Although the author of the Herald Sun article seems to think this will be a "programming challenge", I think it's simple. Let's get back to escapist fantasy. Ten, I have some suggestions for you: Current shows (writers' strike (or lack thereof) dependent): Torchwood
(I've been moaning about this one for ages.) Reruns (new and older shows): Stargate SG-1 Wouldn't you love to see some of these old shows make a come back? I don't think a single teenager or pre-teen today even knows what Airwolf is all about, but I'm sure they'll still find it at least as cool and cheesy as Doctor Who. What old favourites would you bring back? Comments (7) Ms. Karen - You and I have pretty much the same taste in television, including the oldie-but-goodies. Oh how I miss Firefly... Posted 15 July 2008 Elle - Ah, there's one I forgot to add: Firefly! Posted 15 July 2008 Selma - Yes, yes and yes. Nothing is worse than Big Bloomin' Brother - so glad it's gone. YAY! Posted 18 July 2008 David Mascellani - Wouldn't be nice if they filled in a couple of those 120 hours with fresh new Aussie talent? But probably won't happen but it would be good. Posted 6 August 2008 Elle - Absolutely, David. Did you catch Little Oberon? It was a movie that was going to be the pilot of a series if it was popular enough, but nothing seems to have come of that. It was really very good. And Rain Shadow was another good quality series I'd like to see again. Posted 7 August 2008 Moe - The amount of reality television infecting the airways is just ridiculous. I refuse to believe that so many people prefer to watch that crap over quality television like Jericho, Veronica Mars and Firefly (and so many more). Posted 9 August 2008 Elle - Hi Moe, thanks for stopping by. I agree - sadly, I think many people just watch Reality TV because it is the only thing that is on, or even put the TV on in the background as "white noise", and they don't realise that they are endorsing the show in a small way. It adds up. Posted 10 August 2008 Friday 11 July 2008 The Aussie TV channel SBS has a new promo/slogan running called "Six billion stories and counting". One of the advertisements has a number of people summing up their story in one word. I love this idea. Get down to the really simple essence of you. What single word describes your life and who you are? My story is imagination. What's yours? Comments (3) Sam - yes u r right story is imagination me also used to write story Posted 12 July 2008 Selma - One word is hard but I'll go for persistence. Posted 18 July 2008 Ms. Karen - Mine would probably be, "What?" Posted 18 July 2008 Wednesday 2 July
2008 We’re in danger of losing the plot. Comments (4) Selma - I haven't seen Cloverfield, but a friend did complain about the lack of plot after she saw it. Seems good scriptwriters are in short supply in the film industry these days. Gives me hope. Better get writing! Posted 9 July 2008 Elle - Selma, I know you're capable of a really worthwhile story. It would be great on film. Better get that son of yours producing some of your work... Posted 10 July 2008 Ms.
Karen - You know, I thought I was the only one thinking
there was a lack of plots in movies and television. And some books. Posted 11 July 2008 Elle - Karen, I've been neglecting you terribly. I must stop by your blogs. Thanks so much for your visit. Posted 11 July 2008
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