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Friday 7 December 2007
5 Question Meme


I was tagged by my good mate Karen, author of one of the funniest blogs on the Internet, and here (finally!) are my answers. (See, not worth holding your breath after all.)

1. How long have you been blogging?

I started my website in late 2004 and I started the blog half-way through 2005.

2. What inspired you to start a blog and who are your mentors?

It was one of those moments of madness when every so-called Internet expert claimed that all their (so-called) research pointed in the direction of blogs being the most important tool on the Internet, and anyone not blogging would be left behind. 

They were wrong. There are other ways to get left behind, and none of them really affect your credibility and search engine ranking. Besides, according to the expert of experts, Jakob Nielson (the only person I will ever listen to on such matters), we’ve come full circle already and all the splash out there just makes real, solid written content even more important and valuable. 

And although I wouldn't call them mentors as such, I'm paying attention to what Seth Godin and Sonia Simone have to say at the moment.

3. Are you trying to make money online, or just doing it for fun?

*Polite cough* I do make money online. And yes, I do put a lot of effort into it, and it has paid off. Some of it has been fun. 

4. What 3 things do you struggle with online?

Email harvesters, domain name spoofers, and spammers.

5. What 3 things do you love about being online?

The brilliant opportunities I’ve been able to grab by being active online. The wonderful community of friends I’ve built up over the years. The stuff I’ve learnt by having my own website and diving into the online experience – everything from html coding and search engine optimisation to people management skills. 

 

Now... I'm tagging 

- Ms Karen

- Selma

- Ele

- and Groovy Old Lady

with a Reading Meme:

What have you just read?
What are you reading now?
Do you have any idea what you'll read when you're done with that?
What's the worst thing you were ever forced to read?
What's one book you always recommend to just about anyone?
Admit it, sadly the librarians at your library know you on a first name basis, don't they?
Is there a book you absolutely love, but for some reason, people never think it sounds interesting, or maybe they read it and don't like it at all?
Do you read books while you eat?
While you bath?
While you watch movies or TV?
While you listen to music?
While you're on the computer?
When you were little did other children tease you about your reading habits?
What's the last thing you stayed up half the night reading because it was so good you couldn't put it down?
Have any books made you cry?

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groovyoldlady - And it continues...

I tried to copy and paste the questions from your blog to my WP so I could faithfully play the tag game, but it keeps showing up blank. I tried it again and again and started mumbling to myself and grumbling about stupid computers and marvelling over technology on your site that would protect you from from having your words lifted.

Suddenly a groovy lightbulb goes on (darn near blinded me!) and I realized it's because your print is white. 

AHA!

I just went to the page on my WP, hit "select all" and chose "black". I now safely have the survey questions 57 times on one document.

Now I shall put on Alvin (NOT) and see what I can do to thoughtfully answer said questions so I can post 'em on my blog.

You do realize that I haven't even READ the questions yet and I've already used about 15 minutes dealing with this?

Efficient I am not!

Posted 10 December 2007


Elle - LOL Groovy! Okay, it's black on white now to avoid further confusion. Consider yourself the guinea pig... (or hamster rather).  

Posted 11 December 2007


Selma - I'm going to do this right now. Sorry for tackling it so late. I am so glad you are doing well with your writing and editing. You deserve it, you really know your stuff!

Posted 17 December 2007


Tuesday 20 November 2007
Pantsing versus plotting


Any method of writing is valid if it produces something worth reading.

I am a writer who outlines meticulously. But I do know that all of the different methods can work really well for the type of writer that they suit. Call it what you will - pantsing and plotting / freewriting and crafted writing, plus the third option (a bit of both / start with the beginning and end in mind / freewrite until you get stuck then plot your way out of it) - all these methods work somewhere for someone.   Once you've figured out how you need to write to suit your personality, you've got it made.

Stephen King has said some nasty things in the past about writers who outline before they write. He's softened his tone, though, in the last twenty years. But I'm going to poke back, anyway, with the comment that many of Stephen King's books could have done with some plotting - Dreamcatcher and the Dark Tower series come to mind. These books could have been really clever with a bit of hindsight. Mr King is in too much of a hurry to publish. But then, aren't we all?

I hope he gets a chance to reconsider his anti-plotting stance. I know it's not for him, but there are really good writers who plot. Everyone is different, and different is good.

Seriously - this is really semantics. What Stephen King does in 3 months pounding out a first draft, I tend to do for a similar time period in my head. I like it in my head. Stephen likes it down in black and white. Does that really make him better than me? (Okay, don't answer that :-P ) 

I just know that when I'm plotting my soul sings. When I write what I've plotted it's like watching bread bake - it wouldn't rise (for me) without all the hours of kneading and waiting beforehand. 

I prefer to weave layer upon layer of plot threads and tighten them all in the first and subsequent drafts. But I would never tell another writer that this is the only way to write. I would certainly not tell them they are a dullard and their writing is weak without even having read their work. It's a silly presumption to make. 

So, do I have to have every word lined up before I start writing? No, of course not. So much still surprises me, no matter how tightly I've plotted. I certainly don't need to know every word, and I've easily changed endings and let the characters run with new plot threads. It's a balance between knowing where you're going and knowing when to let go and let the story happen.

Over-plotting can box your characters in, making them behave like puppets with no life of their own. You do need to know when to let go, but that's the easy part: your characters tell you. 

What I'm reading: Going Postal by Terry Pratchett

What I'm listening to: the voices in my head

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Selma - I agree with you wholeheartedly. I don't really like to argue with someone as experienced (and famous) as Stephen King but on this point I think he's wrong.
Your website is looking great, by the way!

Posted 26 November 2007

Elle - Thank you so much!  

Posted 27 November 2007


Monday 5 November 2007
NaNoWriMo


So, a great many writers, mainly in the US, but also in several other countries, are a week into the month-long keyboard-pounding session that is NaNoWriMo (The National Novel Writing Month). 

I have several reasons against NaNo (although I do recognise its value to many writers, and I am cheering several of my friends on as they dig in).

My main reason is that November is the most stunning month here in Melbourne. October is generally still a bit chilly. Our clocks only go forward on the last Sunday of October making November the start of the gorgeous long, light evenings. December starts getting too hot here. So November is it if you want to spend any time enjoying the outdoors in any way.

Secondly I'm not a freewriter. I just don't write that way. So I wouldn't enjoy it, and I would feel stressed over an entire month.

Third, I'm lousy with timing things like that. I would probably try and finish one novel so that I could be ready to start another, but then not be finished in time. Then I would agonise over whether to put the first aside and write the second for the month, or keep going with the first (and pretend it was the first chapter of the second, perhaps).

And lastly, I detest the insinuation that all that is required to write a novel is one single month's work and 50 000 words. I know they say, "Go forth and edit" following the November run, but how many excited first timers listen to that?

50 000 words is not a novel. It's half a novel. And a month's worth of freewriting is not going to produce any depth. A lucky shot or two, maybe. But depth and layering comes with months and years of thinking, planning, redrafting, and character development. Just compare Robin Hobb's rush-job Soldier Son trilogy to her painstakingly crafted Farseer trilogy. Even the best can't rush it.  

 

What I'm reading: The Key to Rondo by Emily Rodda

What I'm listening to: Oscar Peterson

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Selma - Even though I'm participating in NaNo myself I have found it difficult to write anything that I found worthwhile because of the pressure to  keep up the word count. It's true that some writers can work like that  and can come up with some good work but I'm just not satisfied with what  I've written and it's nowhere near being an entire novel. However, two advantages of NaNo that spring to mind are that I now have a rough draft to work with and the sense of community I have encountered while  participating is awesome. So it's not all bad!

Posted 26 November 2007

Elle - Thanks for visiting Selma! You're close to getting that 50K - just under five days to go, I'm sure you will make it. 

Posted 27 November 2007


Wednesday 8 August 2007
Grammar


Saphie writes: "I just read the Top ten mistakes used in grammar and I would like to say thank you for writing in such simple terms. I'm seventeen and I still got confused on the difference between Lie and Lay, and 'Past' and 'passed' on when to use in a sentence and in what format. It really helped me. I've asked countless people to explain and none of them really explained it well. I just wanted to comment to thank you for having that on the net for me to find and finally understand the differences between the words."

Thanks for your lovely comment Saphie. 

If you haven't yet read it, you can get a free copy of my grammar report here.

 

What I'm reading: Wyrd Sisters by Terry Pratchett

What I'm listening to: whatever's on Triple J

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Tuesday 12 June 2007
Starting


I've just returned from a short holiday - just a week, but long enough that I didn't want to start any fiction writing before going away. I often find the interruption to my momentum quite jarring, and I've usually taken twice the length of the holiday to get back into my rhythm. 

But now that I'm back, I'm looking at the planning of my second children's book - this is the sequel to the book I've just finished, and the middle book in the trilogy. Oh dear, you're thinking, what is it with fantasy and trilogies? Funny how it works out sometimes - this story was certainly never planned as a trilogy, but it became one (or three rather) very neatly. 

So I've been looking over the notes that I scrawled down in the middle of book one, when the story suddenly developed curves and twists and sub-plot after sub-plot. Both book 2 and book 3 are thought through already, but it's the little details that come out in the initial planning sessions before starting, and then during the writing stages. Starting is very exciting, but also very scary.

The other issue that is adding challenges to the start of this book is that this one takes a different protagonist to the first book, and a different viewpoint character. So it's not really like picking up where the first left off - this is going to be interesting to see if I can get this new voice and perspective to "sound" authentically different to the first.

 

What I'm reading: The Sea by John Banville

What I'm listening to: Trance Online

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Thursday 3 May 2007
Finished (first draft)


I have finished writing the first draft of my children's book at 37 000 words. I'm very pleased with it, but it goes in the fridge now for a few weeks before I take it out and read it... and let my critiquing skills loose on myself for a change! 

 

What I'm reading: Shaman's Crossing by Robin Hobb

What I'm listening to: Oscar Peterson 

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Thursday 19 April 2007
Kurt Vonnegut


Kurt Vonnegut died last week, at the good age of 84 - despite his comments about wanting to sue cigarette manufacturers because he was taking too long to die from smoking. (Incidentally, Mr Vonnegut died due to injuries sustained from a fall a few weeks earlier - not from smoking.)

I put together a Squidoo lens with some blurbs and quotes from Kurt Vonnegut's books

 

What I'm reading: Shalimar the Clown by Salman Rushdie by Salman Rushdie

What I'm listening to: Brad Mehldau

 

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diploma owner - Kurt Vonnegut was a great man and a great writer. I understand that his  death is just a common thing (I mean, all of us die someday), but it's  pity to loose one of the best writers world-wide.

Posted 14 December 2007


Lucy - A friend of mine likes his books very much... it impressed me that the day he died, she was talking about his books all day long... she told me that she wants to read Cat's cradle once again, we discussed some episodes from it... in the evening we knew that he died. Strange... Perhaps if you really understand someone, you are mentally connected somehow...

Posted 17 August 2007


Monday 2 April 2007
The Muse


This is the second part of my musings following Jaime of Fiction Scribe's interview with me.

After thinking about what inspires me to write, I've realised that my characters are my muses. They call to me when I'm in the writing rhythm and they fall silent when I go too long without visiting them. When I allow myself to simply capture what the characters are saying and doing, I feel a resonance like a violin bow being drawn across the strings. It's what I mean when I say the characters sing to me. The plot is the harmony that holds it all together.

I first discovered this sensation once I’d finally got the characterisation right in my first novel, and the characters began to come alive and "sing". I love the depth that they have - none of them are perfect or entirely good people, they have weaknesses and some of them have committed terrible crimes. But I have empathy for all of them. They feel like real people to me, like I could run into them at the supermarket or something.

I also feel that a few other things contribute to the muse. Reading is one of these. I allow myself unlimited reading time if I manage to write even just a sentence. It's hopelessly indulgent, but it works. One sentence easily becomes a paragraph, which sometimes coaxes the characters to sing. It's easy to say, "Just one sentence." Much harder to require 1000 or 2000 words a day from yourself.

Another is someone looking over my shoulder, but in a good way. I write better when my husband is at home – he doesn’t check up on me at all, but I seem to find my focus more easily and I get more done. I think that’s because I want to get my work done more quickly so that I can relax and enjoy his company. 

I also have people with whom I share my early drafts, to get some feedback and also some motivation. For the first time, with my children’s book, I sent my husband’s parents each chapter on completion. It keeps me to a bit of a schedule when someone is there to say “What happens next?” Once I’ve finished the first draft, I’ll rope more friends in for their opinions. 

Hopes and dreams help too – there have to be reasons to write, and I think one of those is the hope that others will read your words and get something out of them. I don't need to change the world, but I would like to make someone think for a bit, or open someone's mind to new ways of looking at things.

Finally, I think my working space contributes. I have a lovely office, with two desks - one for the PC and one for the two printers and scanner. I have two big bookshelves, and plenty of cupboard space, and an armchair by the window for reading breaks. It’s my place to go to when I’m writing, and it makes it feel real.

 

What I'm reading: The Mad Ship : Liveship Traders Trilogy Book 2 by Robin Hobb

What I'm listening to: Sting

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Friday 16 March 2007
Fiction Scribe Interview


I've been the subject of two interviews recently. Jaime of Fiction Scribe interviewed me about writing crime thrillers, and I enjoyed the thought process that her questions provoked. So I thought I'd rework my answers and post my thoughts here too. I'll do this in two stages due to the length - next week I'll post about "The Muse". I'll also do the same for the other interview and post that later next week.

Thoughts on writing

I wanted to be an author from the age of about eight or so - as soon as I realised that real people were responsible for the stories I loved. I was a storyteller from a very early age, entertaining friends at sleepovers with tales of princes and princesses, and making up plays that we would rehearse and put on for our parents. 

I never could decide on a "real" job, so I did a creative writing diploma and a secretarial course to learn to type, and kept working away on my first novel. Writing and telling stories have always been a part of who I am, so it's a natural outlet for my creative expression, my ideas, and the way I view the world.
 

My first novel began as a comedy, but the humour didn't come easily. At the same time I was planning a mystery series because I loved mystery books, and my novel suddenly developed a subplot involving the ashes of a dead teenager. I completed two drafts of this novel and then moved abroad for two years without doing any writing at all. When I picked up that novel again I hated it. I scrapped the whole thing, but reworked the characters and one of the plot threads and decided I was writing a thriller, since I happened to be "into" crime fiction and thrillers at the time. My tastes seem to change every few years - I'm now devouring all the fantasy and science fiction I can get my hands on. 

I don't like the realism and the increasingly technical detection methods of crime fiction anymore, which is why I've moved on to fantasy where I can exercise my imagination with fewer restraints. I used to be a fan of the good, old fashioned whodunit, where clues were considered and suspects checked off the list and the crime was neatly solved. Nowadays I love reading about detailed forensic investigation, but I would hate to write it. I find writing about police procedure and investigation boring, which is why I chose to have the police team hopelessly understaffed in my book. I wanted the implications of the crime to drive the plot, not the solving of it.

Advice for other writers

Try to write everyday to keep the momentum going, because when that breaks it can be difficult to get back into it. Even if you trick yourself by saying you only need to write one sentence, or bribe yourself with rewards, keep yourself in the flow of the work. 

Also, if you're starting out, give yourself a break from reading until you've developed your own style. I realised this one when I started writing like Dickens while I was reading Hard Times, but sometimes it's not that obvious. Later on you can, and should, read everything you can in your genre and out of it, but only when you have your own voice.

Advice for crime fiction writers

Try to get any sort of job in one of the crime fighting fields. Publishers love that connection, and it's very difficult to stay ahead of advances in technology, law, science, etc if you're not somewhere in the loop. At the very least you need a good friend whose brains you can pick regularly.

 

What I'm reading: Frankenstein 2: City of Night by Dean Koontz

What I'm listening to: Brad Mehldau

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Monday 5 March 2007
Finishing


I've reached the climax of my latest book, which means the closing stages are not far off. And true to form, I'm slowing down and battling that fear of finishing alongside every other difficulty I usually face while writing.

Finishing brings sadness, along with happiness. It's comfortable to constantly be "still working on it". Finishing means having to think about the next stages, which are scary themselves: editing is not too bad, but searching for a publisher, promoting the book - those elements make finishing the book a little harder.

But finishing is only a matter of one step at a time, one word and one sentence after the other. And you deal with what comes afterwards when that time arrives. 

 

What I'm reading: The Amber Spyglass by Philip Pullman

What I'm listening to: Alannis Morissette

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Thursday 25 January 2007
First Chapters


I woke up the other night with what I think is finally the perfect opening for the first chapter of my "old" novel. I've lost count of the number of times I've rewritten this chapter, but it must be at least six or seven now.

For many writers, beginning to write at the beginning of the book makes a lot of sense. Developments arise in the same sequence that they will for the eventual reader, making it easy to judge where more information is needed. 

But some writers like to jump around and write whatever part of the book inspires them at any given moment. This can be a natural and free way of writing, and is worth exploring. It's also the easiest way to miss something and confuse your readers. 

 

What I'm reading: The Starthorn Tree by Kate Forsyth

What I'm listening to: Evanescence

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Pantsing versus plotting

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August
Grammar

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The Muse

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